Thread:Antares.I.G.Harrison/@comment-24659969-20151115103545

I know Jizo is powerful, in all sorts of. But the writing in pros-cons section must be something which makes that said unit is different than other units in same tier and/or same price cost. Anything that sounds like "a bit above or lower than average" does not need to be written since it only adds up to the page height, making it becomes wall of texts. In this case, Jizo is uber tier, unevolved cost 500$ and evolved cost 3950$

Lets review a bit your writing:

Pros: (Un-evolved)

 * Triple damage to Black Enemies => Okay
 * Triple damage to Angel Enemies => Okay, but can be minimized with above into just one line of text instead two.
 * Somewhat Long Ranged => kinda, 320 range is true above average for units with such cost (usually around 150 to 250). But, the thumb rules "Anything that have range above Gross cat which is 350 then can be considered as long ranged, lower means medium (usually not need to write) or short ranged (usually added to cons)" => Should just written "Long ranged"
 * Area Attack => Nope, many units at same tier and cost have this.
 * Massive DPS => Okay, most units at same price level (between 300$ to 1000$) only have 1k to 1.7k DPS based on calculation of attack speed (including animations and reloads) x Damage per hit, Jizo got 2082 DPS => High DPS, but not massive. It is even far below the swimmer cat with 3k DPS or even Princess Kaguya from same set unevolved has 2.8k DPS or crazed fish 4.4k record for same price level and easier to obtain.
 * Quite Fast attacks => Nope, already summarized into DPS above and many units also has same attack speed (albeit lower Damage per Hit)
 * Quite Quick => Nope, it is average. Units at same tier and prices ranges from 9 to 15. "Fast" is considered when said units has move speed around 16 to 24 (which is I am fine with Kachi kachi pros section although it is the floor limit), then above that such as Mr. is considered as "Very fast"
 * Cheap to produce => for its almost-hit-the-floor-limit DPS + HP + Ability considered to production cost ratio... okay
 * Fast Cooldown => Okay, at such price level the range is between 70f (basic cat) to 160f while Jizo got 126f

Cons: (un-evolved)
Basically the said units unevolved form does not have any beyond average cons after all that is worthy to be written around. Which is also the reason why this unit unevolved form is praised just as much as Paris
 * Somewhat low range compared to Paris Cat or Dragon Cat => No need to be written. If you want, I can list out all other units with higher range.
 * Sometimes he can move ahead in front of your meatshileds and get killed by near attackers like Bun Bun because of his fast movement. => No need to be written. Rather than this, it should be written for kachi kachi with faster move and shorter range.

Pros: (Evolved)

 * Incredible Damage => Kinda, it is also almost hit the floor-limit like its unevolved form since most other units with same price range stood at 3.5k to 4.7k DPS while Jizo evolved got 4.8k => to be written as "High damage"
 * More Damage than Bahamut Cat => Nope, do we have to write this? Then why not write all those ubers page to have this "More damage than Bahamut Cat" ?
 * Long range => Okay, 450 is long, most ubers stands at 350 to 420 for average so it is beyond par. Even database Spica gives yellow sign for its range.
 * Area Attack => Nope, do I need to repeat?
 * Massice stamina, nearly 6 times bahamut Cat. => What is this typo? But well its HP is high so its okay since most other units under same production time:cost:HP ratio (for units with stacks, this including if hit by enemies using area attack bar which means multiplied damage taken) the average par is 40k to 70k HP while evolved Jizo got 98k HP at top level 30+0.
 * Triple Damage to Black Enemies. => Can this be written into just a line as above
 * Triple Damage to Angel Enemies.

Cons: (Evolved)
All data is from here: http://battlecats.spica-net.com/unitstatus/00.html
 * High Cost => Okay, being unit with top 10 highest cost, can not deny this. Although actually its power:cost ratio is not really that high, almost average.
 * Long Cooldown => Actually it is the top-bar of the average. Most other ubers are standing at 3800f to 4600f cooldown
 * Advances Slowly => Okay, very slow indeed
 * Long waits between attacks. => Yes, this is what caused the low DPS despite high DPH
 * Somewhat sluggish attack animation. => Nope, not really sluggish. It is average

There, the optimized short text would be like my edit with perhaps small more additions like this:

Pros

 * Unevolved: High DPS, long ranged, cheap to produce and fast cooldown
 * Evolved form: High stamina and damage, long range
 * Triple Damage to Black Enemies and Angel Enemies

Cons

 * Evolved: slow movement and long waits between attacks.

Only 5 line of texts and does not make peeps scroll down to read. I will leave your edit as it is for now so you can think about it. 